“Thank you very much for your time, and your careful attention. Your comments were perfectly clear. You gave a very complete picture of what was effective and of what seemed to be missing. You even connected it to exact moments and pages for my reference. I’ve been a teacher for 30 years and for many of those years I have guided students in the writing of essays and stories. So having someone dispassionate deal with my issues logically, concretely and thoroughly is a dream come true! Please keep it up.”